Hi Essence,
What a beautiful poem and what a wonderful gift, especially at such an early age to be able to express what is deep inside on to paper so eloquently.
I wonder if you have ever seen or heard of the child prodigy, artist and poet whose name is Akiane. If you have not, you must check her website out..
www.artakiane.com... you will be blown away at the insight and tremendous talent this girl has and has had since a very early age.
It was really nice to read and "feel" your heart felt reaction to Rhythm's comments.
It reminded me of something I just read last night... how the "essence" of who we are is overjoyed when it is recognized by the same "essence" in someone else.
Have a great day,
James